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经典例题:新型冠状病毒肺炎爆发,假如你是Ling Ling,你的朋友XXX在新冠病毒爆发的一个城市,你的朋友感到非常担心,请你用英语写一封信给他/她,安慰他/她不要怕。
内容包括:(1)安慰他/她,不要紧张;(2)如何预防病毒﹙保持社交距离,勤洗手,多通风,出门戴口罩等);(3)要有信心。(要求100字左右)
审:审题
列:列提纲
填:填要点
补:补全作文,连词成句,扩展成成文
检:检查要点是否齐全,单词拼写、语法运用、标点符号等是否正确。
1. 审题
①人称:第一人称&第二人称
②时态:一般现在时
③作文内容:建议信
2. 列提纲,最常用套话
①首段:
说明事情的缘由,描述现状:
新型冠状病毒 novel coronavirus, covid-19
封锁 lockdown
Some people have tested positive for coronavirus.
The impact of coronavirus is already being felt across the country.
别人的感受来描述现状
Everyone…
Most people…
Some of us…
None of us…
安慰表达: I am very sorry to hear that …
同心理解:Really, it is very common for everyone to…
引出建议:I'd like to give you a piece of advice.
②正文:
提出建议
保持社交距离:maintain physical distance, keep social distancing
待在家中:stay at home almost all of the time
充足的睡眠:get enough sleep
勤洗手:wash your hands frequently
多通风:open the windows, keep the room clean.
出门戴口罩:wear a mask when you go out.
③尾段,表达希望:
I hope things get better soon.
希望继续沟通反馈
I'd love to know what you are doing to stay positive during the lockdown.
3. 填要点,经典例句,套话
①首段表达安慰英语套话:
I'm so sorry to have heard the news.
I am very sorry to hear you are in a difficult situation.
These are difficult times, and I want you to know how sorry I am for your feelings.
表达理解:
And you are worried about the novel coronavirus pneumonia. In fact, it is very common for all of us to feel the same.
引出建议:
Let me give you some useful advice.
Please take my advice.
②正文几个常用的句子
It is important for you to keep healthy. You're supposed to wash your hands very often.......Now, because of COVID-19, washing hands is more necessary in our lives. People around the world spread the importance of washing hands in fighting against COVID-19. I wish everyone can take it seriously. I think it is necessary to get enough sleep.......You should eat healthy food, such as fresh vegetables and fruit......You'd better keep the windows open and let fresh air in....... And you should wear a mask when you go out.
......
......
③尾段,表达希望和信心
I hope things get better soon.
Don't let it get you down.
You know that you can talk to me anytime.
You're strong, and all of you will get through this.
Don't worry about anything except getting better.
You will find my suggestions helpful.
Don't be afraid. Everything will be fine.
希望收到对方反馈:
I'd love to know what you are doing to stay positive during the lockdown.
4. 补全作文,连词成句,扩展成成文
Dear XXX,
I am very sorry to ......
......
Yours, Ling Ling
岳麓区天马小区 Mr ZHU 微信号ID:752429345
5. 检查要点是否齐全,单词拼写、语法运用、标点符号等是否正确。 |
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